. What are the strengths of your partner’s essay? Why?
His opening paragraph was really strong because it made me interested and want to keep reading

2. What areas could use improvements? In other words, what suggestions can you give

your partner that will help his/her paper improve?

He had a few run on sentences.  I would try and keep those to a minimal

3. What is your favorite literary device used in your partner’s essay?
He didn't have any
4. What is the part of the paper that stands out as the most "catchy" or important?
The whole thing was very important.  What he learned from the experience stood out the most to me.